Stuck in between is our existence. At times we slip closer to the great casams of hell and at other times we are soaring towards heaven. But other times we are just drifting.Its a beautiful thing what you wrote. I like it because its different. It isn't something to be fearful of yet it isn't something to not worry about. And it plays a big part in our lives whether we know it or not.

i love the rhyme scheme and the excellent use of imagery. keep writing :D

Powerful imagry and detail. You are very talented.

Much love,Juliet.

Nice action words at the beginning.

cool ending. your good at rhyme.