Hilarious story you did here. Finally, one that satires the slacker/wannabe than making him the main character!

oh my...hahaha this was HILARIOUS. excellent story - you just proved yet again, that you are a superb writer!

well that was sorta funny.. gah.. im envious.. (censored) how come they never give US exercises like that?!?!?! i hate our [previous] english teacher.. anywayz, it didnt have much of a plot, but hey it was for class. :p so yeah. and paolo is SUCH a jerk.. [off to read more]

Hey! This is a really funny short. It is cute how she dumbed him in that way. :) I felt kinda bad for him though. I felt that he deserved a real breakup instead of a fake pregnancy one. I think it was kinda childish of her. Nothing against you, the story is great and written very well. Can't wait to read more!P.S. Thank you for your comment. It really helped me alot. I will try to see what I can do about the story and will tell you when I update it. I really value your opinion. :) Ciao