I love your perspective on things. As a medic, I really needed that lesson. Thank you :)

. . .this essay that in fact is not an essay is in desperate need of cleaning. What I mean by that is that your paragraphs are merely sentences, there is no thesis, no introduction or conclusion. . .it is not even a rant which can sometimes be forgiven. . .and it is so abstract as to belong in some idealistic fairytale rather than a formal, informal or even personal essay.

In short, it does not belong in the essay section.