 Mista Mugs 2005-06-06 . chapter 1Well, it has been awhile, and it seems you still have "it".
Seriously, this was great. Quite nice. And, to throw in another incomplete sentence, um...
Well, let's stick with "great".
My class doesn't start until 11:30 today, an hour later, and I figured that I should probably come read some of that stuff that has been increasingly filling up my inbox. I was not disapointed.
~Magnus |
 Strannik 2005-04-29 . chapter 1Well, Randi, this is one complex poem, and I don't mean it in a bad way. It's a kind of poem you want to reread over and over again, hoping to gain more insight with each reading. I enjoyed your wordplay and rhyming schemes. It's got a nice rhythm and flow it it, too. Congradulations on a job well done. |