Now, this was amazing. It was bloody amazing.

It just ran so...smooth, and it was plain entrancing.

This was the best line (in my subjective interpretating self opinion [thank you again, critical approaches]):

"She leans in to giggle, “I know you, Mister Shadow.I can see right through your gated hollow.”"

Heh, playful and fun.

Also, the ending was done well.

~Magnus

Now there is an interesting jumble of rhyming schemes, no ;)

Personally, I don't like this as much as the previous two poems. That said, this is a funny, witty poem that does a clever job spoofing the "mysterious stranger" character archetype. While it's not as though-provoking as the other poems, it still makes you think.

Someday, I will understand the logic behind this crazy rhyming scheme

Who knows what weirdness lurks in the heart of Randi? No one Knows. HAHAHAHAHAHA!

(Sorry, couldn't resist)

hm. very interesting. I like this one alot, randirogue.