incredible. I love your writer's voice. your methods of expression are amazing and you write with such intensity. very well done.

Wow. If nothing else, this poem is teeming with layers, hidden meanings, subtext and God knows what else. As usual, your rhyming scheme is pretty good. If the only problem I see is that I didn't understand what the poem was about on the first reading. Heck, I'm not sure I understand it even now. But, I suppose that may not be such a bad thing.

Nice again, it all worked together nicely.

Nothign else to say, really...maybe I should end this review with a little poem?

"The penguins dance, and sing, and play/the polar bears scoff/the light glitters down, the ice sheans/illuminating things best left seen."

Meh, not good, but ok, I think.

~Magnus

I like the rhyme scheme here, it's absolutely amazing. This could be a song or something.