wonderful!! and I so know what you are talking about!

Wow... what a powerful poem. It shows how much you're hurt, but personally I think that the words 'hole' and 'holes' are mentiones too much. I also think that the ending should end something like, "My only loveYou."With a fullstop at the end, because it shows that that's it, you're finished. The 'You' without the fullstop makes the poem just hang there, in the other, without an end which bothers me. I also think you could make the last word 'Holes'. Whatever you want.

WC.

This seriously almost made me cry. Very nicely done with the images and the ideas. Would look nice if broken up into verses and a chorus though.~LR