A formal kind of beautiful. I loved how you fit all these extravagant, (black) velvet words in such a short little thing. And the whole crescendo with 'Glass--" got me. Lovely.

OH. Nice. This is a gorgeous, lush, glowing poem. It's rather illuminating in its lack of over-complexity. Bravo!

Amazing

That first line blew me away

So breathtakingly beautiful. Wonderfully done.

i think this needs to be read several times and given time to sink in. and then you can really appreciate the sheer beauty of it. "The ballet / The secrets screaming fairest" simply lovely.

That sent chills down my spine. Good job.

The abruptness conveys a lack of time, and a whirling chaotic of the mind. I enjoyed immensely.

wow

...This is beautiful