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| Last Straw 2005-06-07 ch 1, | abusei like this a lot. i liked "all that you areall that you feel" the best. |
| Zero-Sum 2005-05-31 ch 1, | abuseThe first two lines start off the piece SO WELL. Amazing, you are abseloutley fabulous. |
| Gage 2005-05-07 ch 1, anon. | abusesimple and empty maybe its my jaded eyes but i have no feeling towards it i exect better from someone as amazing as you |
| smile persephone 2005-05-01 ch 1, | abuseScars do hold a lot of past&present emotions and feelings. I, personally, look at them with disdain. Others, though, see them as battle scars (so they can prove that they made it though the hard times). This poem really houses a lot of emotions. Well done! |