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| pneumothorax 2005-06-07 ch 3,  | abuseI wouldn't have placed him at 17, but it's an interesting - if a little simplified - fic so far. |
| pneumothorax 2005-06-07 ch 1, | abuseGood, intruiging start. I liked how you did the assumption that she was a he, although the ski stuff must have been baggy as it's usually easy enough to tell them apart. |