what do i say? how do i tell u that with each poem u write, it makes me think twice about the subject. u are an influential writer, and a good one at that. u have talent; thank god ur using it, becuz if u didnt, itd be a waste.

That's really nice, I like it and the message it holds.

the emotions, the feelings are very clear.. and the imagery is very vivid. good work! write more~

i really like your word choice... and i can completely relate. i love this poem!

good point on the philosiphy of not dating your freinds yet i canot understand that since i have never had a bad breakup and then had to deal with the person afterwards (i hope i never do)

nice word choice

-aaron

This is almost exactly how I'm feeling..except, it was already addressed, and now everything's going downhill. Oh well..graduating soon and everything will be over. So yeah, I'm glad I read this one so I know I'm not alone. Good job.

I no exactly how u feel. Wow, u really no how 2 write a poem relative to a lot of ppl. Keep it up~devil-apprentice~

Hi! I adored this poem because it is easy to relate to...these situations are so confusing and hurtful and when you're going through it u feel as if ur the only person who ever had to experience it. And then you read a poem and realise that (unfortunately) the problem is universial! well written :):)

this is really good and the emotions are strong and touching. I love the flow and the feeling is so heartfelt.

~sorrow~