Wow,

(My wrists smile for communication.)

Really got to me for some reason. I just thought that was just chilling.

MM, Brilliant. That's many lines I adore in this. "My wrists smile for communication." I love that. Love it.

"Silver screams, with lovely swirls"... beautiful. Are you my iner thoughts? I want to capture your mind and carry it with me. Beautiful dark one. (your mind)

This is beautiful. Great imagery. Very deep, dark poem. Nice work. queenvixta

Um.. I LIKE THIS! different. scary. I have alot of lines Id like to quote but I wont cause that would make this too long and I am sure others have quoted already.. Well okay one quote " Silver screams, with lovely swirls" how did you come up with that? That is really good.

Wow. That was emotional and brilliant.

this is an excellent poem. it definitley conveys the emotions well and gets the point across in an interesting way. nice images and words. i love the word bliss. nicey nice. and you know, its funny how if im like thinking about something then everything i think about or see or hear after that is like about the same thing. its so freaky. but anyway, great poem.

YouHaveBeenWarned*

Ease me into darkened bliss,

With scarlet letters on the wall.

Silver screams, with lovely swirls.

And soon, my white turned black.

( Can you guess why? )

i loved that stanza

really good poem. thanks for reveiwing me:) keep writing:)

Interesting, mocking bitterness etched with an underlying fear.

ooh, angsty. very nice, especially the way you wove all the colors in there. well done!and thank you for reviewing my poem, as well.

Beautifully written, sad and depressed a bit. But still really nice

Fuck, you're such a great authort, Ti!

I should really start stalking you more than I do now, huh? XD

But, yeah. I love this poem; very, very conveying and emotional for me.

Next time, tell me about great poems like these! ;_;

Luff!

-Liar

oh. my. BOB. this is wonderful, beautiful, any other nice adjectives you can think of... I especially liked the last line, "I stopped talking by talking too much." that is me in a sentence. once again, wonderful job.

leila*

great poem! it goes with ur sn.

awesome poem