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Moonjava 2005-08-23 . chapter 1
Wow,

(My wrists smile for communication.)

Really got to me for some reason. I just thought that was just chilling.
Venustas iaceo 2005-08-21 . chapter 1
MM, Brilliant. That's many lines I adore in this. "My wrists smile for communication." I love that. Love it.
Sukina 2005-08-08 . chapter 1
"Silver screams, with lovely swirls"... beautiful. Are you my iner thoughts? I want to capture your mind and carry it with me. Beautiful dark one. (your mind)
SayIt'sWrong 2005-06-16 . chapter 1
This is beautiful. Great imagery. Very deep, dark poem. Nice work. queenvixta
Munchin 2005-06-08 . chapter 1
Um.. I LIKE THIS! different. scary. I have alot of lines I´d like to quote but I won´t cause that would make this too long and I am sure others have quoted already.. Well okay one quote " Silver screams, with lovely swirls" how did you come up with that? That is really good.
E.B. Keane-Farrell 2005-06-02 . chapter 1
Wow. That was emotional and brilliant.
YouHaveBeenWarned 2005-05-25 . chapter 1
this is an excellent poem. it definitley conveys the emotions well and gets the point across in an interesting way. nice images and words. i love the word bliss. nicey nice. and you know, its funny how if im like thinking about something then everything i think about or see or hear after that is like about the same thing. its so freaky. but anyway, great poem.

YouHaveBeenWarned*
jainen-black 2005-05-12 . chapter 1
Ease me into darkened bliss,

With scarlet letters on the wall.

Silver screams, with lovely swirls.

And soon, my white turned black.

( Can you guess why? )

i loved that stanza

really good poem. thanks for reveiwing me:) keep writing:)
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-09 . chapter 1
Interesting, mocking bitterness etched with an underlying fear.
Spootasia Tomoe 2005-05-08 . chapter 1
ooh, angsty. very nice, especially the way you wove all the colors in there. well done!and thank you for reviewing my poem, as well.
The Haruspex 2005-05-07 . chapter 1
Beautifully written, sad and depressed a bit. But still really nice
bagheaded liar 2005-05-06 . chapter 1
**, you're such a great authort, Ti!

I should really start stalking you more than I do now, huh? XD

But, yeah. I love this poem; very, very conveying and emotional for me.

Next time, tell me about great poems like these! ;_;

Luff!

-Liar
incandescent.smiles 2005-05-06 . chapter 1
oh. my. BOB. this is wonderful, beautiful, any other nice adjectives you can think of... I especially liked the last line, "I stopped talking by talking too much." that is me in a sentence. once again, wonderful job.

~leila*
sereneXOangel 2005-05-05 . chapter 1
great poem! it goes with ur sn.
Cicy Chan 2005-05-04 . chapter 1
awesome poem
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