|Reviews for My Words|
| Moonjava 8/23/05 . chapter 1
(My wrists smile for communication.)
Really got to me for some reason. I just thought that was just chilling.
| Venustas iaceo 8/21/05 . chapter 1
MM, Brilliant. That's many lines I adore in this. "My wrists smile for communication." I love that. Love it.
| Sukina 8/8/05 . chapter 1
"Silver screams, with lovely swirls"... beautiful. Are you my iner thoughts? I want to capture your mind and carry it with me. Beautiful dark one. (your mind)
| SayIt'sWrong 6/16/05 . chapter 1
This is beautiful. Great imagery. Very deep, dark poem. Nice work. queenvixta
| Munchin 6/8/05 . chapter 1
Um.. I LIKE THIS! different. scary. I have alot of lines Id like to quote but I wont cause that would make this too long and I am sure others have quoted already.. Well okay one quote " Silver screams, with lovely swirls" how did you come up with that? That is really good.
| E.B. Keane-Farrell 6/2/05 . chapter 1
Wow. That was emotional and brilliant.
| YouHaveBeenWarned 5/25/05 . chapter 1
this is an excellent poem. it definitley conveys the emotions well and gets the point across in an interesting way. nice images and words. i love the word bliss. nicey nice. and you know, its funny how if im like thinking about something then everything i think about or see or hear after that is like about the same thing. its so freaky. but anyway, great poem.
| jainen-black 5/12/05 . chapter 1
Ease me into darkened bliss,
With scarlet letters on the wall.
Silver screams, with lovely swirls.
And soon, my white turned black.
( Can you guess why? )
i loved that stanza
really good poem. thanks for reveiwing me:) keep writing:)
| Nobody-n-Particular 5/9/05 . chapter 1
Interesting, mocking bitterness etched with an underlying fear.
| Spootasia Tomoe 5/8/05 . chapter 1
ooh, angsty. very nice, especially the way you wove all the colors in there. well done!and thank you for reviewing my poem, as well.
| The Haruspex 5/7/05 . chapter 1
Beautifully written, sad and depressed a bit. But still really nice
| bagheaded liar 5/6/05 . chapter 1
Fuck, you're such a great authort, Ti!
I should really start stalking you more than I do now, huh? XD
But, yeah. I love this poem; very, very conveying and emotional for me.
Next time, tell me about great poems like these! ;_;
| incandescent.smiles 5/6/05 . chapter 1
oh. my. BOB. this is wonderful, beautiful, any other nice adjectives you can think of... I especially liked the last line, "I stopped talking by talking too much." that is me in a sentence. once again, wonderful job.
| sereneXOangel 5/5/05 . chapter 1
great poem! it goes with ur sn.
| deletethisaccount765 5/4/05 . chapter 1