not too bad... i kinda like it. summer, who could not remember.

yeah, it's weird how you'll just randomly think of things like thati do all the timeawesome jobkeep it up

i liked it, i think u ended it good. ~kw~

This is your first poem? I think it's good! I'm HORRIBLE at poetry! You surpass my skills of poetry writing by far. It was pretty good!

Its sketchy like a Quitin Tarantino film. I'm not real sure what its about, but it makes you think. The only thing awake is that cat chasing its shadows... that is a good line I like that... cause its so true.

~Vermillion