very very good i like how you did your rhyming and the rhythm is very good. nice write. I noticed you have on your favs i have some new stuff. You might want to take a look.

Wow. Interesting simile between heaven and Atlantis... wonderful portrayal.

^_^. . . oh. I'm not sure the smiley is quite appropriate for this one, though. But at least you know now that it gets my props.

A very touching and sad poem. Very good imagery, I cried a little reading it.