ooh...a nice romantic moment ruined...and by the Physics teacher (no wonder i hate physics...lol!) this chapter was a perfect blend of humor and a little romance. great job!

Kim

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! okay, now that i've managed to find an obscure chapter, i'm just here to tell you... I"VE UPDATED MII AGAIN!! U MUST GO RIGHT THIS VERY MINUTE AND READ IT!! I PROMISE U IT IS GOOD AND ENTERTAINING!! like i need to tell u, heh heh just jk, anywho, go GO GOGOGOGOGOGOGOGGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGGOGOGOGOGOGO!

and when u get back, drop me a line! lol

ps. anyone who's reading this besides tanya, amazing story, good chapter, if u don't read it i'll hunt u down and gut u like a fish! Have a nice day!

PPS Tanya, this is Emily in case u were wondering ((u shouldn't be tho... ya... nvm))

"he gave them a pervy smile then perved off" LMFAO! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!1ok, dude, u gotta keep going! that was awsome!! haha... perved off... haha... KEEP GOING! AS IN IMMIEDIATLY!! CONTINUE!! NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW!

ok, ya, i'll ttyl mon mustache pally! toodlez!

ok, any year now you shall continue this... yup, lookit this, i have to go and like, become anonymos oh and look! I can't spell anymore either!! haha, ya... dude... continue! I had to reread the story cuz i forgot it, thats how long its been!! aanywho... ya... ooh, happy new year if i don't talk to you, as this is the offical second last day of the year! yup... ok, well, see ya later

oh, conflict, sorta. Ya, theres a problem that counts! poor thomas and logan! jeez! This is sad! WAH! oh, does he die?! hurry up damnit and continue! lol, and by the way, i did read the next chapter of m, u were just pickin on me weren't u? lol, its so funny!!

awe, that is so sad! I hope Thom is okay. more soon!

Kim

Aww... how sad! But gloom is a good element tho :) . I hope Thom will be okay for a while :D . Don't actually think so tho, lol, so yeah. Loved it by the way. Short and sweet... kinda.

Yay!! You finally updated!! Thank you for the notice, and the review!! This chapter was awesome and awkward at the same time, lol. Well I'm hoping for you to update another chapter, Captain's daughter 2 AND the Fairy one, I forgot the name well please update soon! And don't take too long~!

BUWAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHA! SALAD!! WEHE! OMG!! SO AMAZING!! ur writing is crushing mine, lol, its so good!! HEEHEEHEE!! The manager, haha, the driver, "looked rather murderous" heeheehee snicker dee doodle, whoa where'd that come from?!! lol ,anyway. continue!! SO AMAZING!

OMG I friggin' LOVED it! Wow, wow, wow, wow... you've definitely grown as a writer, and I SO look forward to the next chapter!!

aww, they finally kissed. that's so exciting! great chapter per the usual. i can't wait for more.

Kim

Oh wow! FINALLY the kiss! Hehe awesome job! This chapter was worth the wait... keep it up! Oh, and while reading this chapter I was listening to "rocket queen" by guns n' roses and as I got nearer to the end the song neared the end and... wow. They really went together well, I mean really! Well, srry I couldn't read this sooner, I was grounded from the computer for not cleaning my room and I just got it clean, lol. Laterz!

Luv n' Peace

Ok, I have a few suggestions. First, how old are logan and allisson? They seem to act kind of juvenile sometimes. Second, when someone has been hurt like Allisson, they are very hesitent to tell someone. Especially someone they barely know. Other than that, I think u have a good story going here.

Finally you have updated! But update more! I liked this chapter, although it was a bit shocking (I don't know why). But it's really nice. Please proceed the act of updating!

lalalala... whats this? A GENIOUS STORY AT WORK!! WOWZAI"ll just stick to WOW!! HEEHEEHEE!! I knew this would happen! Haha, they name their horses funny, SambO GeckO, next will be OreO and PillO and Jell-O!!AHAHAHAHA!! I made a joke! AHAHAHA!!ok, breathing!! OOH!! WHO HAS ALLISSON MET B$? WHO "hurt" HER?? WHO WHO WHO!?!?! THEY should be part of the story! oh, nvm, u de writer, not me!! (hee hee) ok, ttyl, KEEP GOING!! LIKE,, NOW!