it's really good, but in several places you used the name "Chester" instead of Derek. other than that it's areally good stroy, and very sad.

Another really powerful story. I envy how you can get all of that huge range of emotion into one piece. The ending was really sad.

oh man...that was really sad...but really good. i like how at the end you have dereks pov. oh boy...time to get some tissues...

Wow, I really love this writing and it's very intense. I'm really glad I red this story.