Love this one too, no surprise there, eh? I love the brutal honesty you write with. Really seriously do.

Oo I liked this! It wasn't really a romantic poem (I usually don't like all that mushy stuff) but more of a practical kind of thing. You showed that you were moving on, which I greatly admire in people. And the repetition you used worked really well! Excellent! I really enjoyed this.

Thanks also for reviewing my poem. I'm gald you liked it and yup, Heaven will be all I expect it to be and more. Thanks again and God Bless!

The last two lines hits the reader. Great, made me feel all nice inside. :)

Whoa! The poem brought tears to my eyes 'cause I'm going through the same thing. I'm so glad I read this poem because I just can't, for some reason, find the right words to describe my emotions. Thank you.

V. well written!

WC.