"they embody the ageless beauty and enigmatic charm of an era long since eclipsed by cross-cultural mingling and technological development."

the beauty of what? women being educated pets whose only purpose is to entertain men?

while i disagree, i appreciate your writing style and think that this essay was very well done.

well written. and a flair of a style.

kakyou

expecting nothing less.

Eloquent and sophisticated use of language, and fascinating subject matter. Well done!

This was very clearly written, well-organised, and an interesting read as well. The author was able to adopt a conversational tone while maintaining professionalism--that is, not straying too far into colloquial speech.

In the future, however, I might suggest to the author that she refrain from stating her score on an essay or work submitted for credit (as so done at the bottom of this work). It is good and healthy to be proud, but tasteless to be overtly so.

My only suggestion, therefore, would be that the auhor remove the last line of the work: recieved 150/150 points. Any well-educated person will recognise the merit of the piece without your stating it.