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| Coping Mechanism 2005-06-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good, I am glad to read something longer from you, and I was interested to see how you'd tackle the issue of romance. And although I am a hypocrit cause I've written my fair share of them as well, I get sick of reading love poem after love poem on FP, whether it's about how great it is, or how much it sucks, but I was anxious to see how you handled it. And you did a remarkable job. Congrats. |
| LyLTiArApRiNcEsS 2005-05-15 ch 1, | abuseI like this poem =) |
| Stephen Haramis 2005-04-28 ch 1, | abusewow, you've definitely progressed in your writing, i can tell, very good stuff! |
| Ahemait 2005-04-28 ch 1, | abusethe title seems to fit, but is a bitt too long. the ending line was good, but didn't fit with the line above. besides that, it's good. could be either a song or a poem, i guess |
| mizu no kokoro 2005-04-28 ch 1, | abusewow, the emotions are very well expressed in this poem/song^^ Great work! I reli enjoyed reading~ keep writing! |
| weirdchild 2005-04-28 ch 1, | abuseWow. What a meaningful poem, though... it's not powerful. It doesn't sound like you've experienced it... have you? Maybe you haven't, lol. 'Cause there aren't any emotions, only actions. V. well written, though! WC. (Sorry if you didn't want any criticism.) |