You caught the emotions head on and described them effortlessly. Bloody good poem.

You hit that right on the head. It's subtle truth was so effective and it was overall just perfect. I can completely relate and you put those feelings into words so skillfully it was AMAZING. WONDERFUL!

I love it... You're an amazing writer truly you are. I love it...it's just beautiful in every aspect!

Thanks for the reviews! I know it's hard to stop cutting...try reading A Continous Fight..

I just wanted you to know that Ithink the poem you wrote is brilliant. I really love it - the way you writemakes it sound like you're in my head and know exactly what I'm thinking andfeeling - and it has a great flow as you read it too.

Anyway, just wanted to let you knowI think it's Lindasunflower

It's good, you've got talent. The forced rhyming takes away from what you're trying to say... i.e. "blood tears strong." Poems don't have to rhyme to be poetry, it's a common misconception that they do. You may want to try rhyming every other line, like..

I was wondering when you'd noticethe last time I gave you a kissthe waiting drove me crazybut for you nothing was amiss

..or, not rhyming at all.

Anyway, it's a good poem.. sturdy theme and good imagery, but it does seem to be reaching a lot when it comes to the rhyming .. also, some parts are too blunt. Subtlety brings a lot to a poem, especially when there's room for interpretation. I can't wait to see more of your poetry. Keep writing. :)

Dana

K's Moonshadow you are really gifted, your writing is amazing and I feel I know this place so well that you have put into words I never could. Take good care, Love Debbie x

I can really relate to this. In 8th grade a year ago I started cutting myself. Not really because of stress or grades, but because i had a very unsatisfing home life that made me want to tear off my skin so instead I teared into it. Good Job nice potrayl. I really like it. Oh BTW i've stopped but it still crosses my mind.

Wonderful! You have a way with capturing that emotion-please continue!