|Reviews for Closer To You|
| smile persephone 4/28/05 . chapter 1
The repetition of 'I want...' gets rather old after a while. It doesn't seem like a poem to me. Some variety within the poem's structure and word choice would be nice.
| xxsyringexx 4/28/05 . chapter 1
*glares* i know who you were thinking about tho. *Points* HE is A FAG! *HUFFS* GOOD JOB!_