very powerfull poem especially the lin "What I used to release and control in poetic phrases and blades, no longer is enough." you captured the person's feeling very well, a very well written poem.

~*Toni*~

I'd like to review but I am afraid I have run out of good things to say... (I have a limited nice vocabulary)

ah... tragedy... the famous suicide note... everyone has been there and you were right on target...

i liked the ending most..it was the best part because it means so many things...great job this time

Wow, Very nice, very poweful.

Solo.

wow. it is powerfull.