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| scissor.hands.make.it.fun 2005-08-16 ch 1,  | abuseyou're not so bad. i love you! on a more, reviewing the writing note, you're really really good. somone just reviewed dominoes saying it was really long... they shouldn't have read it then! it has a word count, lol. anywho, i wish i was as clever as you when i was your age. keep writing stuff, i love it all! |
| Winged Shadow 2005-05-01 ch 1, | abuseOh, that's kind of interesting. I don't know why you don't have more reviews. The whole thing with her talking about how she hates the girl, and how disgusted she is with her - and then it turns out that she and the enemy are the same people . . . it's pretty interesting, really. You write pretty well, from what I can tell (which isn't much, but hey! You writing looks cool). Oh, hold on, I got the right idea, right? Her enemy IS her, right? I'll be so embarrassed if I'm wrong. |