wow, i love this poem. the conclusion is so strong, you get straight to the point with what the patriot act is doing and what has been going on even before it. very nicely done.

Not attempting to bash the poetry, (It is wonderful, actually.) but this isn't entirely true. You overexaggerate the facts to their extremes.

Well said!! We need people like you to show to the world the mistreating that happen to human beings in jails, the government does not respect the Human Rights. A civil from Irak is worst treated that a murderer who has killed several persons. Speak up here, express yourself!!Loved it, please go on like this.