This is good, the ryhme scheme keeps the flow and the story works well as a poem. A little more imagery would have been nice as it seemed a little like a short story in ryhme form and less like a poem in its own right. Good job.

Glad to see you're writing some poetry. You've been such an uber reviewer and it takes me this long to realize you've put some new stuff up ::feels ashamed:: Her bf sounds like an uber prick man...sux that you had to take the blame. And screw being the poetic type, it relieves stress well and beats cutting and crap.

If it means anything...I don't think you're an idiot. If someone you care about is in pain, there's nothing wrong with standing up for them. Some people may not understand, and it may be hard...but protect the ones you love. No matter what.

Good, I've never read a poem I like as much as this one.