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| Writing4Eternity 2006-04-08 ch 1, | abuseGreat story |
| v-love 2005-12-06 ch 1, anon. | abusewa omg im crying! |
| BabyPop Massacre 2005-05-05 ch 1, | abuseDude!This was freakin' awesome! I loved this story so much.You made me cry! |
| Black Butterfli 2005-04-30 ch 1, | abuseThat was really nice and well-written. I liked it. It was kinda sad, though. Very melancholy. But that's my kind of story--the sad, tragic love stories. You did a good job writing this. At first I was a little confused at what time period it was, but then the character's thoughts and feelings revealed all. Joseph seemed nice, not at all like the white boys I've met. I liked his character and his whole rebellion against his dad thing. It was inspiring. And Ellise was just beautiful. She was a dreamer, and that was sweet. But even though I knew her end wouldn't be so dreamy and happy, I was glad she found SOME happiness. I prais this. The only problem I have with it is that I wish it would've been longer and chaptered :( |