I like the beginning a lot please continue with it!

that was interesting... i liked it!! cool! i've never been good at fight sence but that was so cool!

Hm... very intense fiction :) I enjoyed it very much

Possesive, aren't we?

Wow. I saw your profile (awesome by the way) after I clicked on a link at DarkLadyKnight's and well this story blew me away. As a matter of fact, I take it upoun myself to gladly read every single part of this story and then poke, pry and nag for more. What really pulled me in was your writing style, its nice to follow and the words seem to flow together. But the main reason I scrolled through this treasure mine of epic tales was the fact that you have muse's to! I currently have barely enough to count them all meaning my heads a bit crowded and its noisy and chaotic... but hey thats how I work. Now on with the praise! Right off the bat I knew that I was going to like Christian and The Lord, espiecaly (o.k. I know I cant spell but its guessable right?) how they contrast and how they seem to be complete opposites but in a nice way. Then there's how the Lord was very laid back even when he choose to keep Christian and how Christian seems like a very firey person that wont easily submit so its going to be intresting to see the next few parts...well this has gotten long hasnt it?...long for me at least. Anyways I'll be reviewing again in a few!

*Jumps on you* God, I love this story to pieces. It's so... so... *winks* Well, you know what I mean.

For a first chapter, this is aboslutely thrilling and amazing. I love the way that though the two men are busy fighting as enemies, Michael still has the time to be like, "Well, instead of killing him, I think I'll keep him as a pet..." But that's cuz he already knows he's gonna win. And poor Christian doesn't even know what's coming.

I still think sacabatous are cooler than katanas... :P

I really do like the overall setup and how the story is running so far, so do all of your fans/readers out there a favor and continue this story..

Oh, and don't be like me and take three months + to update :P

Love ya baby,

Julian

Are you crazy you had better continue this, this could be a great story, but you have to continue it for it to go anywhere.

...do you even need to ask if it is good?? gah! your talent puts so many to shame T.T how do you do it?!? i mean i'm still addicted to all your other stories but this one started off really really nice!! please update soon! this was excelent and i can't wait to see what happens next. (I know this is random but i've seen your pen name in the credits of some anime lol it actually reminded me to check back on your stories and lo and behold here is an update!! yay!!) wonderful job!