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| CryNowLaughLater 2005-05-01 ch 1,   | I LOVE the imagery in this piece, it's so vivid, your word choice is fantastic. I don't know why you don't like it. I do. And guess what?...that's all that matter!..muahahaha!Nice job, Bravo! |
| JenniRose 2005-04-29 ch 1, | I really liked this, with all the description and imagery, and I like the pattern, the repetition of the 'i am from', very nice. |
| Aslan Israel 2005-04-29 ch 1, | wonderful imagery and honesty. Nice job. |