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| I wish i could fly 2006-01-16 ch 1,  | abusebrilliant, ** brilliant. i love the sort of rambling flow of this, i especially love the first stanza. great |
| the naked civil servant 2005-12-14 ch 1, | abuseoh... i think you may have to be my favourite poet. |
| Chandra-Moon 2005-12-11 ch 1, | abuseI love the strange, almost rambling fluency of this; "seemed to have/suffered from palindrome/syndrome and never let the edges/of curiosity's cube surrender/to the cooler curves of chaos". It made it quite an interesting, griping read. Good job, keep writing. |
| addie pray 2005-06-04 ch 1, | abuseStrangly obscure and realistic all bundled into one. I love the vocabulary in this, and the line "flowers that the world had once agreed were lovely in the breeze". Great job. |
| C.J. Mahan 2005-05-21 ch 1, | abuseI've not seen a poem so powerful on this site. Ever. It's a glorious depiction of anger-past-consiousness, desperation, and absolute misery. Yet, it is not without a certain sense of triumph over advertisment, accomplishded, perhaps, more by the writer than the charecter. Amazing, really. Simply amazing. |
| dollface and her cancer 2005-05-12 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant. Absolutelypositively brilliant. It's abstract, popculture, sophisticated, in a mix that very few people can actually accomplish. You've made a sharp, almost fantastical poem that people can relate to or step back and admire. I'm awed, amazed, and moved. The phrases alone are worth praise, from "Curiosity's cube" to the recurring "he said, she said" theme. Wonderful work. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-04-29 ch 1, | abuseit was brilliant. I found that it mimicked a lot of gossip, really, the formatting of it- you echoed it so well. good job to the extreme. |
| Aslan Israel 2005-04-29 ch 1, | abuseWow. Lots of alliteration in that one. Nice job. |