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| lindserly 2005-06-10 ch 1,  | abusethis is a very great description of a passionate first kiss. there's a certain word i'm searching for... oh I've got it... i mean to say it's got some really amazing imagery. good job! |
| youzi 2005-06-07 ch 1, | abusereally lovely! i wouldnt know if it's accurate or not...haha...but then it sounds lovely. keepw riting =D |