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Reviews For: Dream Date

Trinity Valyntine 2005-04-30 ch 1,	GREAT- I LOVE IT! PLEASE WRITE MORE OF IT OR LIKE IT! I PRAISE THEE!sorry, i had to get that off my chest..-Trinity
xillbeyourcupid 2005-04-29 ch 1,	aw. so cute. is this going to be a sotry or not? id love to read the rest if it is!
satinsmoke 2005-04-29 ch 1,	aw...it didnt really happen! i like the pun with "dream date". anyway, update soon!
jennycraig10 2005-04-29 ch 1,	strange but incredibly interesting... it has me hooked! can't wait for the next update!
Lomsadiasy 2005-04-29 ch 1,	Hm... interesting. i like it.By the way i am also a girl who reads at lunch and wears glasses, but i'm not a loner. fortunately i do have friends, but anyways, i like the dream thing, unexcpected (i think i spelled that wrong, but ok). Update!
randomunknown 2005-04-29 ch 1,	This is good, I dont normally read anything other than poetry but you kept me interested! I think this has a skeleton (or a few of the bones!) to make a fantastic longer story, I'd love to know how and when the dream becomes reality, regrets alicia has for finding out how her life could be, if it affects any decisions she makes..wow, you've really got me into this! well done.
disturbedcookie 2005-04-29 ch 1,	I quite enjoyed that. It's been a while since I've been even slightly interested enough to read a whole story so I thank you ^_^ but of course there can always be improvement...At the beginning it just seems like somethings missing, a tiny bit more descriptive maybe? I think you need to give the reader a better idea of the setting just because it's easier that way and it seems less confusing. Some sentences seem a little out of place as well, example; "Yeah, like what?" The 'yeah' seems too strong a sounding word to fit in with the rest of the context. Well that's all I can see overall though I enjoyed it :D

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