Great work, I can tell that this poem means something more then it says.

Great poem. Nice title.

Twilight Starr

I really liked it. As soon as I read the first sentence I loved it.

Constructive Criticism:

I would have liked it more if the words were spelled properly. But overall it was great.

this one is good too. well done, I think you're a good songwriter

I like this a lot. I like how you use the italics, really adds to the depth of it. Great wording too. QueenVixta