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| swtdreamz101 2005-04-29 ch 1, | o reminiscent- spelled it wrong, haha oh well, feels tranquil for some reason, it just flows, nice poem |
| Obsidian Eyes 2005-04-29 ch 1, | That was really...amazing. I loved it. Write On |
| citrus scented 2005-04-29 ch 1, | powerful ending. this is a very captivating pome- a beauituflly sad tale you tell and some wonderful images and descriptions in it. I love the contrasts in it, speacilly in the first two lines. |