Hi! Thank you first very much for your review. . . and on to your story!

I like the line in italics at the beginning because it sets the mood for me.

ooh. . . what's up with Azhure (I like the name)?

I can't wait to read more, but I probably won't be at it for a while because of stupid, evil schoolwork!

VERY NICE AND KEEP WRITING!

-Arrow's Flight-

I like it, but I do have a bit of criticism. Its just a little simple, not bad simple, just you could do so much more to give it a bit more of a kick. Maybe more adjectives. Reminds me of a lot of my stories when I was your age though, so keep at it.