all i can really say about this is that it's awesome..

now i had a proper chance to read it i like it alot. It reminds me of something new and fresh, like a new morning. I'm sure i've grabbed the wrong end of the stick yet again...but i've said it once and i'll say it again..i dont really understand.

Well done love, your a confusing but brilliant poet.x the cow

as always brillaint...as always i dont understand

nicely written, this poem makes my heart be at peace right now. thanksCowGirl

isn't this based on your poem "love hate love"? )

thats really original! nice topic and writing

Beautiful. Flowed perfectly. Great job.

it's really good I like it a lot. The only thing I would change is that the last line seems to need another syllable in the last line.

aw.. very sweet... we can all relte

Wonderful poem! Good work. Keep it up!