Great story, it was very realistic. It also made you think about the things that people go through to make them grow up the way they do.

this is a really good story. its sad and somewhat scary and disturbibg in places but really well written.

I love it. You put so much emotion into your writing and it's so realistic. I can't think of anything to make it better. So overall, great job.

I luv this story! It made me so sad.

nice job...but when you do flashbacks, make sure u indicate that somehow :]

wow...just wow...to the next chaper i go!

I must say, I think THIS one of the best stories on here. I loved every bit of it, with the exception of the fact that it ended. I would definately buy this story if it was in a bookstore somewhere.. and I don't say that about many stories.

i really enjoyed this story. it was very powerful and it takes a lot to get a reader to sympathize with a murderer.

OH PATS. I love it so very much. Even more than the first one.

I really like how Jeremy dies in this one. With the infection, it seemed too logical to flow with the rest of the story. This way was more painful and sad to read, it brings out more of the ** that Jeremy was feeling.

Oh, and the transition from Jeremy to David at the end of Chapter 24 (and like I said, the transitions from talking about the present to the past) is awesome. It kind of makes the situation seem more realistic and heavy.

One thing though, PATRICIA, you seem to repeat words a lot in one paragraph. I suggest pronouns!

Poor Sam.

Once again, Interesting. I rather like it so far...wonder what happens next.

One thing, though. Chances are you know this already, but if someone is cold to the point of being completely numb, when the feeling comes back it's almost impossible to move and it burns like all hell broken loose. Trust me, I froze my arm once(I do strange things when I'm bored). It was really cool until the feeling came back.

Interesting...I'm curious to see where this one goes.

Wow. I really like this. I love how Jeremy decided to finish what he started. I think there is a little part of me that is sadistic, although I do not know if that is just recently or if it has always been there. Anyway. I'm not really sure if I could give you much advice on writing. My own writing is only just becoming close to what I want it to be. I've been living in my own head rather than trying to get into someone else's. And even though I'm pretty sure you already know this, you're an awesome writer, and the next time I get some money, I'm definitely going to hunt down A Mirror Image. And I'll keep an eye out for Jeremy. Make sure you keep writing, too, or I'll have to send Linda to yell at you. ;D

Wow.. that was an amazing story. It was so sad.. you put alot of emotion into it and made it seem so real.. good job.. and keep up the good writing! :)

great story!! hope you continue with it

Great chapter! Sam's views on religion are quite like mine when I was little I gave my heart to Jesus but then I started thinking about it. My family is religious and right now I'm a closet agnostic. And I guess that's kinda drawn me away from them, but when I told my mom i was agnostic she says I can't change my religion til i'm 18 and that really ** me off, now i'm forced to go to church and live like a christan, and my parents views are forced upon me which draws me further away from them, but ** happens. I really think its all kinda lacking evidence, and without that how the hell am i supposed give everything i believe to these magic men that go by the name of J.C. and god?