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| DeathOnRepeat 2005-05-03 ch 1,   | it is beautiful, and this time... you will win we will win... and you knwo it. |
| OnWingsOfRavens 2005-05-02 ch 1, | You know what I think about the message behind the poem, I think. But as for the poem itself, I really liked it. I especially like the opening lines. They're powerful and well-written. Usually, I don't like so many rhyming lines, but I think you kind of got away with it. I love your writing. Just remember-good poems don't have to rhyme! |
| Trajo 2005-04-29 ch 1, | WHOA. I think i missed something pretty major. Am i allowed an explanation pweez? If not tis ok. Anywho. Lovely poem my danae...weird way to spell that...whateva. I love you! as always continue writing away. |
| myheartiswaypastbeating 2005-04-29 ch 1, | That was awesome!I love it! Caliorbust |