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| laughter at the funeral 2006-04-21 ch 1,  | abuseyou really made me think...i really like the bit with the antagonists telling "itoldyouso's"...surely there is something beyond the fairytales' happily ever afters...very good job... truly yours... |
| do not resuscitate 2005-05-30 ch 1, | abusethis is awesome. it's so witty. i love love love love it. "imperfection is easier to love and//you forgive them when they PMS." gah! perfect lines! |
| thosewhomustbecarried 2005-05-07 ch 1, | abuseHa, amazing. I really love the opening -it's great to care to save the cow yet find a tree has been wasted anyhow. It's great to see a poem with a strong point (other than unoriginal ways to commit suicide). Truly a great poem, going in my favs. Cheers ^_^ |
| addie pray 2005-05-06 ch 1, | abuseI loved the idea behind this, and I never considered the whole Aurora/menopause/100 years thing. Crazy. The ending, I very much adore. I can't get over that whole last stanza. Well done. |
| smile persephone 2005-05-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is pure genius. You so easy turn cliche Disney into perfection. There are so many quotables and I can't pick just one to praise you with. Lovely, lovely! |
| negligible fictional force 2005-04-30 ch 1, | abusefairy tales have been cliched since forever but you give them a refreshing twist with a cynic kiss. you're becoming pessimistic, me boy. though your poetry remains cheesecake divine. -kismet. |
| only weekdays 2005-04-30 ch 1, | abusewow. *am in shock* that was reallky awesome! i like how you look at things from a different point of view.keep writing and much love (: |
| omiee. 2005-04-29 ch 1, anon. | abusei dunno, this was funny and cynical and all but sirry, i don't really like it because it doesn't sound like you. it sounds forced and like a glass pane over your real voice and it's not coming out like rich chocolate milk like it always does. are you okay? but if i look at it only on the surface i suppose it's lovely as always. it just doesn't sound you |
| Lady Rhiannon-Faye 2005-04-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was hilarious, undoubtedly. I particularily love the first, fifth and sixth blurbs. Your style is so wonderful yet comedic, in that lovely place between dead serious and pure humorous... and I LOVE it. RAWQ ON |
| NumblesTheAuthor 2005-04-29 ch 1, | abuseTHAT IS SO GREAT! i love it, really...keep up the good work |