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| Layla737 2005-05-30 ch 1,   | aw I like this. a lot. you can add so much to this... give it a lot more content. but I love it either way |
| Serena Berry 2005-05-09 ch 1, | it is very simple, but yet complicated. That really is what growing up is like |
| Lady DreamWriter 2005-05-03 ch 1, | holy smokes! the Pain!! Great goddess, are you all right?! |
| Wing Chant 2005-05-01 ch 1, | Wow, I understood exactly what you were meaning throughout the entire poem. I think you meant when you said: "Let me plant it and watch it grow Watch it blossom and bloom Then let me break it Rip it and destroy it Break it in to a million pieces And then put it back together Old and new" It meant that your reletionship with your friend/sweet heart sometimes was blossoming, everything was grand. When you guys fought, you shattered eachothers hearts, but one of you always seemed to make up with the other and said 'sorry.' A word that pulled all the fragments into a whole once more. That's what I got out of it, anyway. :P As you could tell, I really liked this poem. It was splendid to read, and the flow matched the pattern of your words perfectly. A round of applause is in order for you! *claps her hands* loserz. ;) |
| empathic life 2005-04-29 ch 1, | this is awesome! i really get what you're saying here, i think. nice to read professionalish poems! |