I'm not crazy about the 'meandyou' thing..it's a little...tacky. But this is a well-written piece.. i loved 'echoing the inaudible mutter of pearls' and 'licking syrupy temptation from your kiss'.. Keep writing D

fragile reality slip through the pieces ofmeandyou.

Perfect. Flawless. One of your best, I think.

You have actually taken all the elements from my parodied "Poetry Manual" and made something worthwhile out of them. Cheers.