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| The Sweetest Oblivion 2005-08-05 ch 1, | abuseaw so sweet. i liked it. |
| La Velvetine 2005-07-24 ch 1, | abuseSounds like Dorian Gray ... Heard of him? He is in a book written by Oscar Wilde. This poem reminds me of him. Nice, I like. |
| Stefan Vorell 2005-05-11 ch 1, | abuseWhat's reall yscary is how much your poetry reminds me of ideas and charcters for the stories I once amd eup in my head, back when i was an avid reader. This poem is a personification of one of my main characters. |
| Rose of Granuaile 2005-04-30 ch 1, | abuseThis is really great. Wonderfully worded, the rhythm is awesome, and the rhyming is great. As for the subject, very meaningful, you put a lot of meaning into each verse. Well done! ~Hip |
| LovingTarquine 2005-04-30 ch 1, | abuseRHYMING! |