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| a muse's inspiration 2005-08-28 ch 1, | I love the last four lines, they really tweaked my heartstrings. Well done William, you're the poet we all wish to be. *love* naomi x |
| youzi 2005-05-01 ch 1, | I found it a bit strange that every word began with a capital...this piece has an interesting, somewhat aggressive quality..Do keep writing =D |
| flerix 2005-04-30 ch 1, | There is only one word I can use to describe this... Wow. |
| Rose of Granuaile 2005-04-30 ch 1, | This is lovely. Just wonderful. I really enjoyed it, again the rhythm, rhyming, and overall wording are awesomeness. The subject touches my heart, I think we all know how this feels... Excellent job! Brava! ~Hip |
| LovingTarquine 2005-04-30 ch 1, | Aw. |