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| In Darkest Night 2006-05-05 ch 1,   | My obssesion with the Moon is a happy obssesion, and this poem almost puts that into sane perspective, lol |
| The Pink Angel 2005-06-02 ch 1, | Really good imagery. How you painted such a wonderful scene I will never know. |
| The Dark Rose 2005-05-19 ch 1, | Loved it mate.Short. Sweet. And to the point.Reminds me of my Glisten poem. How have you been anyway? |
| Zodiacreborn 2005-05-11 ch 1, | Well written. I'd attemt toward constuctive criticism but I enjoyed the poem and found little flaw. |
| Greenwitch 2005-05-11 ch 1, | Wow, this is very moving...very powerful. Good job! |
| Stefan Vorell 2005-05-11 ch 1, | Okay now this is giving me the chills, this is very similar to a poem I never uploaded entitled "Orb of Torment" The moon is the best part of the night, and lately for me it has been hidden by clouds. I love how Steven King and Peter Straub put it in the talisman. "Run with the moon." Indeed, may the moon never wane. |
| Learah Kaelar 2005-05-01 ch 1, | Some of the grammer seems a little weird, but it depends on how you want the poem to sound, so don't take that to much to heart. This poem is so full of meaning, I love it! And I'm really glad you started writing stuff again, HORRAY! Blessed Beltane! |
| Living in a story called li... 2005-04-30 ch 1, | but i thought celestrial means heavenly, spiritual, oops im a baka it also has to do with astronomy sorry!! well i liked your poem write on! ^^ and again im sorry *sweatdrop* |
| Rose of Granuaile 2005-04-30 ch 1, | Another grand one. Just wonderful, it's so full of meaning. Brilliant job! Brava! ~Hip |
| LovingTarquine 2005-04-30 ch 1, | ^-^ I'm happy that you began writing again, William-san. Good work on the new poems up. I like them very much. This one was sad, but sweet. |