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| addie pray 2005-08-14 ch 1, | I love Marilyn Monroe. This was a lovely tribute. I loved all the images in this, (** bruise the silence like rib cages, trapping the unsaid in bone) - amazing. |
| AboveTheSalt 2005-06-21 ch 1, | beautiful. lovely tribute to her. captures it all just perfectly. and + for the twiggy reference. -salt. |
| Rimbaud's Whore 2005-05-03 ch 1, | Great tribute to Marilyngorgeous iamgery, and I love the title, very beautiful.I like how you showed corruption without condoning. In the fragile lines an essence of a marilynesque beaty lies. |
| Made in U.S.A. 2005-04-30 ch 1, | wow this is beautiful and i love it! keep writing :D |
| flerix 2005-04-30 ch 1, | Personally, I don't really like this poem either. It has meaning and everything, but the feel is so dim and everything... |