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| Anikke 2006-06-22 ch 2,  | abuseYou really should update. It's an adorably wonderful story. Infact, all your stories tend to be. :] |
| myhiddenstory 2006-05-13 ch 2, | abuseThat was really...strange.Not bad, but it just seemed so...erratic. Like how he can go so quickly from being angry, to happy, to angry, to making out in two paragraphs. Hmm..good attempt, though it's not one of your better ones |
| Anne Onymus 2006-05-13 ch 2, | abuse!! i like ths chapter! :) hmm, i can't decide if i like Brayden or not... he seems too obsessed about what other pope think about him... maybe he'll change; can't wait to see what happens! :) post more soon! x0x; Anne |
| Anne Onymus 2006-05-06 ch 1, | abuseI think it'll work out between them no matter what Shan thinks. i love the names you chose for your characters by the way, they're very original! i love what Brayden said; "The girls are jealous because you’re prettier than them and because they can’t have you and the guys are mad because their girlfriends all want you.” that's so great! how do you come up with things like that? i really like this story and i'd love to see how it turns out, update soon!:)x0xAnne |
| Jamestastic 2006-04-27 ch 1, | abuseI liked it alot. I was just kinda surprised cause everything was going all 'normal' and then BAM he kissed him. Caught me off guard. I do like though, please write more...if you want... James. |
| LadyoftheRings28 2005-07-26 ch 1, | abuseI like this one. you seem to write a lot of storys about stuff like this. lol but that's cool cause they are awesome stories. I'll read the rest soon |
| StarDust Rocker 2005-04-30 ch 1, | abuseI likey like!! That's a great opening so long as you keep it up things will go great! You shouldn't care whether or not anyone likes it too! Write more soon. Ja! |