I don't normally review my own things, I think it's sort of egotistical to... but this one calls for some explanation. This one is between myself and my alter ego. Eh, some of you will assume I'm joking, I don't really care. Anyhoo, this is one of many arguments I've had with her. In case you missed it, every other stanza changes who is speaking. That may make it a little easier to read if you want to go back and read it again with that knowledge. Anyhoo, it seems y'all liked it eventhough you didn't get it, lol, so, whatever. Thanx to everyone reading my stuff!~Hip

Wow. All throughout this, I can't help but hear a song in my head...but then again, I'm reading this with my CD player on max volume, and people on the other side of the classroom can hear what's coming through my earphones, so I'm pretty sure there's a reason, lol. But it's good, I felt emotions, uncertainty, rebellion, guilt, all fighting against hate and pain and, essentially, the feeling of being betrayed. But, each person sees things differently, and just because that's what I see, doesn't mean that that's what you saw in your mind when you wrote this. Though I'd appreciate it if you told me how close I was to the truth when you contact me again!

Wha...? You lost me here. I think i'll shut up now.~Drow 218

Slavery is freedom. Yes? :)

This sounds like an internal debate that raged onto paper. Nice job.

this is interesting, i'm not entierly sure what its about but its still pretty kewl. keep it up.

~William~

awsome I really love this I love the feeling you put into it.