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| The Dark Rose 2006-10-22 ch 1,   | Nice poem. Nicely written. Nicely executed. You got a skill there. I wanna see it grow. Should I be brave enough to read a story of yours? |
| Jani Rieme 2005-05-20 ch 1, | Wow, this really shows how things really work. People should read stuff like this before they assume that the only thing hurting someone is the bruise on their face or the sracth on their arm, when what's really hurting is the pain they feel inside. |
| Drow 218 2005-05-18 ch 1, | This poem is not quite in your style, if you know what i mean, Hip, it doesn't quite fit your personality. Nice poem, don't get me wrong there, but it's not of the norm for you.~Drow 218 |
| The Random Witness 2005-05-17 ch 1, | This is great! very heartfelt and sad..~TRW |
| heffiji 2005-05-09 ch 1, | The first two stanzas really seemed to stick out. Quite an interesting piece. Good work. |
| HauntedMisery 2005-05-06 ch 1, | Great job on this!! |
| William G. Thorne 2005-05-02 ch 1, | wow this is really good i like the way you set it up and the rhyme scheme. great job!! i wonder what inspiered you to write this. it is pretty sad but its true and very well written. ~William~ |
| youzi 2005-05-01 ch 1, | I liked the idea you summed up in the summary..but could not help but wonder if some of the impact has been lost in the piece..Do keep writing =D (P.S. hope my frankness's Ok with you) |
| Arcane D. 2005-04-30 ch 1, | the from was neat and organized as usual. Usage of metaphors was awesome. Funk on Hip. -ADD |
| Kali Aja 2005-04-30 ch 1, | I like the imagry and the first to stanzas very much and feel that the poem conveys an important message. Keep writing^^ |