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| Maria Regina 2008-03-01 ch 13,   | The thirteenth story with thirteen chapters? How coincidental *cough*. |
| Blood.Butterfly 2005-08-24 ch 13, | wow. cool. so... rei turns into rachel, kel's sister? just a bit confused by that last part. but twas awesome!! good job. |
| Ms Urania 2005-05-29 ch 13, | Unexpected ending. I wonder what happened to Kel. It did get rather confusing at times, but it was nice to read something different. Glad you decided not to drag it out and knew where you wanted to end it. |
| SubliminalAnarchy 2005-05-25 ch 1, | I really liked this story.. I can't wait for more (: |
| Ms Urania 2005-05-11 ch 12, | This just gets more and more convuluted. I'm a getting confused, but at least it's not predictable! Still think Rei/Jen should be more grateful as Kel saved her even though he could have just left her. However, Kel must have done something pretty sinister to get a promotion...hm? Keep writing, I want to know what's going on! |
| Ms Urania 2005-05-11 ch 6, | Ick how painful! I still don't understand his reasons for picking her. Was it because she stayed on the floor when she wasn't supposed to or has been looking for her specifically? Also what was the point of trying to kill her earlier if he needs her? |
| Ms Urania 2005-05-11 ch 3, | You establish Jen's loneliness and alienation well which makes all these bizarre, inexplained circumstances even more creepy. |
| Ms Urania 2005-05-11 ch 2, | Oh my goodness, the last few paragraphs of this chapter freaked me out! So far this is riveting and original. I don't usually look at the Horror section because I'm a scaredy cat, but I'm glad I came across this. On to the next chapter... |
| Tenar and a Half 2005-05-03 ch 8, | It's so good... so full of emotion. Please please please keep writing! |
| Tenar and a Half 2005-05-01 ch 4, | Wow, you're a really talented writer. Keep it coming! (I have two names I use (Tenar and Tenar and a Half) sorry for any confusion.) |
| Tenar 2005-05-01 ch 3, | It keeps getting better! On to the next chapter! |
| Tenar and a Half 2005-04-30 ch 2, | Ooh... It gets better and better! |
| Tenar and a Half 2005-04-30 ch 1, | Ooh... so good. Can't wait to read what happens! |