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Reviews For: The Dark Time

Agent Firefly
2006-02-09
ch 1,
abuseI love this story more than I could have possibly expected. It is completely enthralling; you entered into the mind of the character and bled it all into words. Wow!
Encaitare
2005-05-18
ch 1,
abuseWow. This story is so powerful. I love the style -- it reminds me of Delerium from the Sandman graphic novels, if you've ever read those. Nice work,

~Enca :)
Rozovian G
2005-05-11
ch 1,
abuseThe mind of a fruitcase... Seriously, I enjoyed this. (should be locked up for that)

This is... I'm seeing some form of metaphor in it, and a little moral/something lesson in it, that about people being left so alone that they get nuts and how it may not be all too healthy for them nor others.

Your very... direct form of writing the patient's thoughts was bugging me at times, all the, like, fruitcase terminology and somewhat looney use of language and blah blah blah... But in the context of the story, I can't see any better way to write it.

The end was a bit... Odd. But overall, this was... good, if I can say that without having to run from ppl in long white coats andescape from nice soft rooms and stuff. Good story. Creepy, but good.
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