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| killer queen 2006-06-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseno, i adored the ending. your style is short and raw, one sentence overrules the need for a paragraph. i like it. :) and it's even cooler that i know who you are.. |
| annoyingauthor 2005-05-05 ch 1,  | abuseThis is quite cool but i don't get hte ending. The pencil is uncapable of wat? You should just add something simple like "writing" to da finsih. it'll make more sense. otha dan dat i really like. keep up da good work. |
| flowerthief 2005-05-01 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I hate it when we have to write about somehting specific. It's o limiting.Nice work. |
| Kicking Poe 2005-05-01 ch 1, | abuseI totally agree! I love this poem simply because it does not seem like a poem. Irreverent and...brilliant! |